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Albert Einstein menjadi terkenal ke seluruh dunia Setelah teori relativitas umum dirumuskan,pencapaian yang tidak biasa bagi seorang ilmuwan. Di masa tuanya, keterkenalannya melampaui ketenaran semua ilmuwan dalam sejarah.

education

Education is on of the way to achive yor dream!

Ketika sedih, aku bersinar bagaikan bintang pagi. Ketika patah hati, hakekatku justru tersingkap sendiri. Ketika aku diam dan tenang seperti bumi, tangisku bagaikan guntur yang menggigilkan surga di langit tertinggi.

Segalanya yang kau lihat mempunyai akarnya di dalam dunia yang tak terlihat. Bentuk akan berubah, namun intisarinya tetaplah sama.

Enjoy your life, no matter how hard it. May seems, may life gve you a reason to cry. Show the world U have a million reason to smile.

Senin, 28 April 2014

Task of sixth meeting




Topic      : The hardest thing I have to do
Title       : National Examination
Genre     : Narrative Paragraph






National Examination




I think the hardest thing that I have to do national examination when I was in Vocational hight school. it is something that does not make sense because the results of our study for three years specify within three days. but what could I did? I have to followed the rules in force in the country. it is something thrilling for me.
In the first day, exactly at eight o’clock am.  All of student have ready to doing the exam. The subjects in the first test was Indonesian language. My mind was pre-occupied with my countless number of panic. In addition to that, it was also my first exam test, so I had zero idea what will happen. The not-so-friendly aura of our proctor also did no help. I was frightened the whole time. At the start of the test, while our was reading the instructions out loud, I was busy fidgeting in my seat, trying to quickly recall what I studied. If only I knew that it only worsens my already-worsening anxiety. As a result, most of my answers were uncertain, even though I clearly remember studying them beforehand. I was so frustrated! Little did I know that it was only the start of an unforgettable nightmare.
The second day, was examination of English language. I was enjoying the English part because I was confident with almost all of my answers when in the middle of answering, our proctor commanded us to stop and proceed to the next part of the test. I looked at my answer sheet and my eyes widened at how much I have skipped—almost half of it was left blank. How worse could that moment be? But alas, I can’t do anything about it. So much as I hate to, I helplessly flipped the pages onto the next part, which is about reading comprehension. Just when I thought that I was doing fine with the rest of the exam, the proctor distributed the papers for the essay. I was pretty confident, not to brag or anything, but I have always enjoyed writing. But I think I’m going to save that for another essay. To cut to the chase, of all the time in the world, it was during the test that I was struck with a writer’s block. Not a single word was coming out of my mind. Needless to say, I ended up with two paragraphs filled with nonsense. I really hated myself.

The third day, was a test of mathematics. At the time I have to be calm down and meticulous and have doing the test well, because that was the last day I took the national exam and I have to be optimistic and confident, I should believe in my own abilities, I began to read about each one and started to answered, it was not as hard as I thought to answered, I remembered the formula mathematical which I have learned before, the proctor approached me and asked me “why you looked spirit?” I answered “ because the questions very easy Sir.” the proctor responded well, “do it right and fix your time as well as possible.”  finally I could finish the math test well and on time.
After that moment I realized, actually the hardest thing I have to face is fear, if I do something with an optimistic and confident then the results would be good.But if I panic and nervous the result will not be good altough I have been studying hard like when the first and second day I did the test of national examination, but in the third day I did the test calm down and confidently so, all of question felt easier. I will get it done properly. indeed be a valuable experience for me. And I was very grateful when the result of national examination announced I graduated. truly that was a miracle.



Note :

purple          : Orientation
blue              : Complication
dark blue     : Complication (climax)
Orange         : Resolution
Red               : Reorientation/ conclution (in form suggestion)

Selasa, 22 April 2014

FIFth MEETING


1.  Tell the description of narrative writing and how to differ from other writing genres

Speak about narrative, we have known about description about narrative writing right? Ya exactly, a narrative text is a text to amuse, to entertain the reader and deal with actual or vicarious experience in different ways. Narrative deal with problematic events which lead to a crisis or turning point of some kind, which in turn finds a resolution. We can write a narrative text about the facta or just a fictive story.

The narrative text  is telling of a story or an account of a sequence of events. One of the four traditional forms of composition (along with description, exposition, and persuasion). Narration differs from exposition, which can also relate a sequence of events, in that narration need not be factual and may be written from the perspective of a character in the text.

The purpose of a narrative, other than providing entertainment, can be to make the audience think about an issue, teach them a lesson, or excite their emotions. In well-written narration, a writer uses insight, creativity, drama, suspense, humor, or fantasy to create a central theme or impression. The details all work together to develop an identifiable story line that is easy to follow and paraphrase

So, how to differ narative text with the other writing text genres? We should know a Narrative text is a text focusing some spesific participants that have several structural features making different from other genres. Narrative has social function that is to tell stories either in present which is called present narrative, past event which called past narative, and feature which is called future narative to entertain the readers ( smalley, and ruetten,1984 ) . narrative is used most often in :
Fables
      Myths
Legend
      Detective stories
Adventure stories
      Thrillers
      Period dramas, etc.



 Generic Structure Narrative Text



In the Narrative Text, the order is as follows:

ü  Orientation

At the Orientation or introduction of introduction of the characters in the story as well as the time and place of its occurrence.



ü  Complication

On the Complication of an overview to the emergence of a crisis or problem in natural by the story that needs to be solved.



ü  Resolution

The Resolution describes how baigan character from the story to solve problems that exist on the Complication.



ü  coda

Coda which summarizes the point of the story and moral massage we may get.



Language feature of Narrative Text



a.       Usually using a Simple Past Tense sentence patterns

b.      usually begins with an adverb of time (Adverbs of Time) Such as: a long time ago   once, one, once upon a time.

c.       Using processes verb : tell, says, narrates.

d.      Using temporal conjunction : chronological order





How to differ from other writing genres?



It might be confusing to differ between narative and recount because both of them almost same right? Howefer, this explanation may help you to understand the propositions. Something which happened in the past is the main resources to compose both recount and narrative text. In writter’s point of view, the thing is an experience. It can be what the writer has done, heard, read, and felt. Thus, composing recount and narrative mean to retell the experiences of the past event to be a present event.

Howefer, you can distinct between recount and narrative can be differentiated from their generic structure. Recount text present the past experiences in order of time or place. In simply way, recount describes series of events in details. It does not expose the struggle on how to make them happen. The event happened smoothly. On the other hand, narrative text introduces crises and how to solve them. Narrative text always appears as a hard portrait of participant’s past experience. It reveals the conflict among the particopants. The conflict is the most important element in a narrative text. Narrative text without conflicts is not narrative any more.



   2. Write the steps how to make a narrative writing. Don't forget to give example for every step.


A narrative text usually has description of features and rhetorical steps.

a. Plot

The plot answers the questions “What is happening in the story?” and “What is the sequence of events?” Some stories have simple and straightforward plots. Others have complex plots that make the reader think and ask questions: Who solves problems? Stories that flow well keep the reader involved and interested. Additionally, the plot is the sequence of events showing characters in action. This sequence is not accidental but is chosen by the author as the best way of telling his or her story. If the writer has chosen well, the plot will produce conflict, tension, and action that will arouse and hold the reader’s interest. Children want what most adults want in literature: action, happenings, questions that need answers, answers that fit questions, glimpses of happy and unhappy outcomes, discovery of how events grow and turn. plot (rhetorical step) is more than the sequence of actions or conflict. It is also the pattern of those actions. If the plot pattern is oversimplified it is visualized as follows





Biggining > problem > climax > resolution > ending.

















The Rhetorical Step of Narrative

Narrative order in fiction, the order in which events are related, may follow several patterns, but the most common pattern in young children’s literature is the chronological arrangement. If a story relates events in the order of their happening, their story is in chronological order, perhaps moving with the characters from one place of action to another and yet chronological. Order is easy for children to follow if within their experience; chronological order is therefore more frequent.

Rising action begins with the situation that must be shown and explained. This explanation for the situation and the characters’ condition is called exposition. It is placed in the beginning. In most stories for children, it is woven into early section so that attention is caught immediately and held. Then, this early action grows into a suspense that holds them to read. Early readers like the suspense of “What’s going to happen?” The writers for children must decide how much suspense the child can sustain and how much reassurance is needed to balance suspense. The peak and turning point of the conflict, the point at which we know the outcome of the action, is called the climax. In a progressive plot, suspense pulls the reader through the rising action to the central climax, where conflict is resolved in a manner foreshadowed and inevitable; the last questions are usually answered in a denouement, with its closed ending.

b. Characters

Characterization addresses the questions “Who are these people?” and “Are they believable?” Characters need to be authentic for the reader to connect with them. Readers seek characters whose humanity touches theirs. Characters are also easy to relate to and believe in. Characters some to life for the readers through what they say, their actions, and what others say about them.

c. Setting

Setting informs the reader of where the story is taking place. It answers the questions “Where am I?” and “What will I see if I walk around here?” More frequently, the setting falls into the background, and the reader is not particularly aware of it. Readers know immediately, however, when the setting is not well drawn, because they cannot feel the sense of where they are.

Meanwhile, Anderson and Anderson (2003b) explain five steps in constructing a narrative text. They are orientation, complication, sequence of events, resolution, and coda.

In orientation, the narrator tells the audience who is in the story, when it is happening, where it is happening, and what is happening. In complication, the narrator tells about something that will begin a chain of events. These events will affect one or more of the characters. The complication is the trigger. Then, in the next step, sequence of events, the narrator tells how the characters react to the complication. In this step, the feelings of the character and what they do are included. In addition, the events can be told in chronological order (the order in which they happen) or with flashbacks. The audience is given the narrator’s point of view. In resolution part, complication is sorted out or the problem is solved. Coda is an optional structure in a narrative. In this part, the narrator includes a coda if there is to be a moral or message to be learned from the story.

To make it brief and easier to understand, essentially the generic structures of a narrative comprise three points: orientation, complication, and resolution. The other two components as proposed are just variations or can even be considered as optional since the two are not differently essentially.

Narrative can be presented as written or spoken texts. Written narratives often take the form of novels. The story is usually told by a narrator. If the narrator is one of the characters in this story, the story is said to be told in the first person. If a person outside the story is the narrator, then the story is being told in the third person (Anderson & Anderson, 2003b).

In addition, narrative text may take many kinds or forms. They are myths, fairytales, aboriginals, science, fiction, dreaming stories/bedtime stories, and romance novels. Among those forms, fairy tales or fairy story has lots of sub-forms: fairies, goblins, elves, trolls, giants, and talking animals.

Additionally, a narrative usually include the following grammatical features:

a. nouns that identify the specific characters and places in the story.

b. adjectives that provide accurate description of the characters and setting.

c. time words that connect events to tell when they occur.

c. verbs that show the actions that occur in the story.

The primary rule for developing a sequence for introducing stories is to progress from simple stories to more complex stories. Factors to consider are (a) the number of characters, plots, goals, and sub-goals, (b) the number of attempts by characters to achieve the goal, (c) the explicitness of the story grammar components (the main characters, goal, and conflict), (d) the length of the story, (e) the readability of the story, and the amount of background knowledge required by students.


3. Rewrite your narrative writing, and show or underline the topic sentence on your writing.   






4. Explain why your sentence is called as the topic sentence?

Topic Sentence
Reason
One of the great experience in my life when I was first class in Junior High School about my experience learnt to swam.
This sentence is called topic sentence because it contains a complete sentence. Then, it is the main topic that will be developed in supporting details.
Once day the subject was sport, so my sport teacher asked to all of the students include me to went to BCNY swimming pool
This is called topic sentence because it is the keywords about what will be explained more in the next sentences or paragraphs.
Before we swam we should run around the pool for warmed up in other that our muscles didn’t cramp
This is a topic sentence because the next sentences are the detail information about how the test is occur and brings to the complication or problem.
Suddenly my spirit rose up.,I should be able to beat my fear, because fear only made me become a loser.
This is a topic sentence because the next sentences are the detail information about how to solve the problem or resolution.
I hade didn’t felt scared again as before
This is a topic sentence and include concluding sentence.



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