Third Meeting
IDENTIFYING PARAGRAPH AND SHOWING OR ANALYZING WITH
ADEQUATE AND INADEQUATE COHESION.
One of the way to write a good paragraph should pay attention coheren and cohesin. Basically, cohesin mean a point of connectivity in a
tex while cherence Coherence refers to how the reader easly able to understand
and cmprehend the text which we wrote. All f them are characteristic in
writing, because paragraph
can not be separated from the name coheren and cohesin without coherence and cohesin we can not make a good
paragraph. how a paragraph can develoved, and then make a good paragraph need a good
organization also like main idea from the beginning until end. One main idea
you can be developed into spesific topic usually called topic sentence. In the
topic sentence there are two parts. The first is a topic and the second is a
controling idea. So in the paragraph shuld there are connectors to join the
ideas together.
1.
How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion?
a.
Determine or choose a theme or topic
The first step in making a paragraph is to
determine or choose a topic of paragraph. Theme defined subject matter, while
the topic is the subject
b. Paragraph
discusses one and only one main idea from the beginning until end. One main
idea you can be developed into spesific topic usually called topic sentence. In
the topic sentence there are two parts. The first is a topic and the second is
a controling idea.
c.
Make some supporting sentences based
on the topic sentences in order that the
topic sentences explainted in more detail.
d. Conclude
all of the sentence that we wrote become concluding sentences. Such as prediction,
summary, logical conclution, suggestion you can choose one of them.
e.
Editing
and Revising the paragraph with used the components of cohesion such as :
- Relevance, basically this lack of cohesion means a lack of sufficient connectors to join the ideas together. If I try hard I can understand what the person is saying: a short answer, an explanation, an example; however the sentences don't fit together so in the paragraph need coheren too.
- Using chronological order
- Using linking word or transition word. Transition words can make the flows of the contents smoothly such as : because, due to, altough etc.
- Repetition of key words.Repeating key words in a paragraph is an important technique for achieving cohesion. Of course, careless or excessive repetition is boring--and a source of clutter. so should used skillfully and selectively, the technique can hold sentences together and focus the reader's attention on a central idea.
2.
Tell more about cohesion.
Cohesion means a textual quality, attained through the use of
grammatical and lexical elements that enable readers to perceive semantic
relationships within and between sentences. Cohesin is use of repetition, transitional expressions, transit, and other devices (cohesive cues) to guide
readers and show how the parts of a composition
relate to one other. So Coherence refers to how easy it is to understand the
writing.
3.
The difference between coherence and cohesion.
4. Analyzing with
adequate or inadequate cohesion
I’m A Cheerful Girl
My name is Rini Alistia, my nick name is Alice.
I’m a chearful girl,
energic, simple, easy going, kind hearted and nice one. I always
cheerful altough I’m sad, because when I
smile and laugh with my family or my friends my sadness is loose. My home is located near Palm
Indah Park West Metro, Metro City. But actually my parent’s home at Bandung
West Java. I have a creamy skin like another girl in Asia. I have a soft skin
as you shake my hands.You may feel like silk. I
have a slim and a tall body resembles a korean actrees in Asian Drama. On the lower part of my face
are two sexy lips and a half-egg chin surrounded
with oval face and pointed cute nose. Those are about my physical caracters.My hoby is
reading novel. I like English and American Novel and I colect it, such as Harry Potter, The Twilight Saga, The great gatsby, Invisible man, The
lord of the flies, The color purple, etc. And I colect too Indonesian novel
such as Ketika Cinta Bertasbih, Ayat Ayat Cinta, 30 hari mencari cinta, Eifel
I‘m in live, Pudarnya pesona cleopatra, Bumi Cinta, and many more.When I read a
novel I feel happier than I watching the movie version it. I feel in the
another word because it can make my mind blow. When I read a novel my felling
like a main character in that novel. Beside reading novel, I like trip
in nature like go to the beach or the mountain when I have long holiday. One of
the beach that I like is pangandaran beach.
Pangandaran beach is exotic beach, it has a big wave like in Hawai beach. I like
too trip to the mountain such as Manangel mountain and Kebun Raya
Cibadas at Cianjur West Java, If I on the mountain all of my weary is loose because the view is very
gergous and make me comfort.
The view all of green as far as the eyes can see loo just
like a green carpet. I more
spend my time just listening music and make and reading
Novel, because if I a lot of reading novel, and learn about it. That’s thing can increase
my knowledge especially in literature and I’m sure in the future I can write a good
Novel like Stephany Mayer.
Sentence
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Explanation
why The sentences categorized into cohesion
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My name is Rini Alistia,
my nick name is Alice. I’m a chearful girl, energic, simple, easy going, kind hearted
and nice one. I always cheerful
altough I’m sad, because when I smile and laugh with my family or my
friends my sadness is loose.
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The sentences include of categorized into
cohesion because the sentence has corelation with the topic, the topic
developed become the topic sentence
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My hoby is reading novel.
I like English and American Novel and
I colect it, such as Harry Potter, The Twilight Saga, The great gatsby,
Invisible man, The lord of the flies, The color purple, etc. And I colect too
Indonesian novel such as Ketika Cinta Bertasbih, Ayat Ayat Cinta, 30 hari
mencari cinta, Eifel I‘m in live, Pudarnya pesona cleopatra, Bumi Cinta, and
many more.When I read a novel I feel happier than I watching the movie
version it. I feel in the another word because it can make my mind blow. When
I read a novel my felling like a main character in that novel.
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That
sentences shows the cohesion because there is a word “because “ because is transition words and transition word include of cohesion catagory. that word make a sentence with to another sentence more clearly
The first sentence is relevan with another
sentence because the writer talking
about hobby and the next sententence explained abuot the hobby’s of writer,
the hobby is reading novel.
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If
I on the mountain all of my weary is loose because the view is very gergous
and make me comfort
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That
sentences shows the cohesion because there is a word “because “ because is transition words and transition word include of cohesion catagory. that word make a sentence with to another sentence more clearly
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I more spend my time
just listening music and make and reading Novel, because if I a lot of reading novel,
and learn about it. That’s thing can increase my knowledge especially in
literature and I’m sure in the future I can write a good Novel like Stephany
Mayer.
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That
sentences shows the cohesion because there is a word “because “ because is transition words and transition word include of
cohesion catagry. that word make a sentence with to another sentence more clearly and
then there is concluding sentence in form prediction, and
concluding sentence include of categorized into cohesion
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